My dream job

PART 1

“What’s your dream job?” test Result: Actor/Dancer/Musician/Artist/Singer


Actor/dancer/musician/artist/singer?

My possible job in these 5 is actor because it’s the most interesting job. I love movie and I spend lots of time watching movie or shows. I like every kind movie (comedy, action, romance…) I like also dancing but I’m not good at dance that’s the reason why I think that can’t be possible to be my future job. Musician, artist and singer are far away from my future job because I can’t sing and I’m little bit shy.

I think the actor job is fun and great experience. They also earn much money what is always plus for the job. I think my usual day at work is doing hard at work and meet lots of new people. What is bad at being actor is your going to be celebrity and you got lots of fans. Bad way in that is you don’t have an own space and you can’t do what you usually do because they are going to follow you all around.

What motivate me the most is enjoying doing that. Maybe money motivates me too. I hope my salary is good/normal than other actor. That’s mean a lot.

(movie trailer)

 Challenging words:

Unique=ainutlaatuinen

Quizzes=tietokilpailu

PART 2

I choose Harvard University (American) because I had always dreaming about living in America and got good education. Harvard is famous all around the world and that had to be good school.  Many popular/celebrity people has graduate in there, like Barack Obama.  I want also some changes for Finnish school.

By Toni

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3 thoughts on “My dream job

  1. Contents: Good
    Well done, Toni! You have clearly read the instructions carefully and followed them when writing your essay. Part 2 shows that you are capable of doing online research and the structure of your essay is balanced and your opinions well-justified. However, you need to work on your grammar or else even the best essay will be difficult to understand.

    You’re off to a great start, just keep working hard and challenging yourself and you can achieve anything! Acting sounds like a wonderful plan, Finland doesn’t have enough Vietnamise-Finnish actors in the industry :).

    Media / appearance: Good
    Mission Impossible is a blockbuster 🙂

    Grammar: Satisfactory
    – OUT OF these 5 OPTIONS
    – I love movieS
    – every kind OF movie
    – good at dancING
    – can’t be a possible future job
    – A little bit shy
    – is WORKING HARD and MEETING people
    – THE DOWNSIDE OF BEING AN ACTOR IS BEING A CELEBRITY
    – you GET fans
    – NOT HAVING YOUR OWN SPACE AND PRIVACY is a DISADVANTAGE
    – what motivateS me the most
    – I hope my salary is AS GOOD AS the other actors’ salary
    – that_ meanS a lot
    – I HAVE always DREAMED about… and GETTING A good education
    – IT HAS To be a good (=prestigious) school
    – many FAMOUS celebrities/people HAVE GRADUATED FROM there
    – I also want A CHANGE FROM what I’M USED TO IN FINLAND (words order!)
    http://www.ego4u.com/en/cram-up/grammar/word-order/adverb-position
    Use the ABC proofread button! Practice using verbs here:
    http://www.ego4u.com/en/cram-up/grammar/tenses

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